Christon L

It was a dark Halloween, when I snuck out of my house, through the window in order to go get candy. As I was leaving my house, I heard a high pitch scream that came from my house. I was wondering what happened, as I mused of all the possibility that could happen.  I started to walk towards the door, when suddenly the door opened. I was feeling aghast because of the unexpected action. Temptingly, I went in my  house to observe what had happened. I stepped in; As the door slammed, I knew it was a trap all along.

One day, David a boy, decided to go on a walk. So, he got out of his house, slipped his blue jeans on, and then put his black rain boots on. David, was now ready to go. He opened the door of his house and stepped outside. He stared walking on the sidewalk, when he notice something. He saw a great big pond surrounded by vast amount of people and trees. As he went near the pond, he thought this is a big pond but there is nothing in it. Out of no where, a dog as fast as a bolt of lightning hit David into the pond. David was clueless of what happen, as he flew into the pond head first. He was now stuck. Unexpectedly, the dog said, “you are now the center of attention; rest in peace and good luck David.” The end,” John said. He asked the kids if they like the book “The Boy in the Pond,” and they responded with a yes. After the story, they went home to go eat supper and carry out the rest of the day.

 

I have found four enticing post and decided to comment on these blogs:

 1. Nevaeh’s blog-About Camp: I commented on Nevaeh’s blog- About Me. I really liked what he wrote about. I found it very intriguing that Nevaeh liked camp. In addition, his blog was very descriptive and had a lot of vivid detail. I commented -” I liked you post about camp very much. It was very hilarious, and had so much vivid detail. In my personal experience, I to have been camping, and found that it was very astonishing.”

2. Logan’s blog-My Goals: I commented on Logan’s blog – My Goals. I found this blog and wanted to lend some help to him. He has trouble solving division problems, so I commented on his blog to motivate him, and I listed a site to help him. Here is my comment – “Practice makes permanent,” my math teacher tells me. If you want to achieve your goal you must take the initiative and work outside of school. If you really want to improve on division, then I would recommend you go to ixl and practice.”

3. Abigail’s blog- How to comment on a blog: I chose this blog to comment on because, it had steps on showing how to comment on a blog. Since I am a new user on edublogs,  I need to absorb as much information as I can. This blog gave me the basic fundamental on commenting, and is the reason why I commented on this blog. Here is my comment – “Thanks for this information. This information was very useful since this is my first time using edublogs. Also, it was very simple and was esay to understand. I would say this was a well done blog.”

4. Danny’s blog-Hatchet: I visited Danny’s blog – Hatchet. I commented on it because, I have read Hatchet and found that it was a good book. I wanted to recommend that he should read the other books of hatchet. I commented – “Hatchet is one of my favorite book. I finished book 1, 2, and 3. I found it very appealing and suspenseful. I would recommend you read book 2 and 3, because these book are nice to.”

These are the top four blogs I found and liked. I had a fun time finding and reading these blogs.

– see you later